Writing Task 2Problem and solutionTarget band 7Education

Task

In many countries, young people are leaving rural areas to live in cities. What problems does this cause, and what measures could be taken to address them?

Task

A problem-and-solution essay. Every solution you propose must answer a problem you actually raised — unmatched pairs are the commonest failure in this type.

Model answer(270 words)

The drift of young people from the countryside to cities is reshaping rural life in much of the world. It creates two serious problems in particular, and each has a response that is realistic rather than merely well-intentioned. The first problem is the collapse of local services. Schools, clinics and bus routes are funded and justified by the number of people using them, so when the working-age population leaves, these close — which then gives the remaining families a further reason to go. The decline feeds itself. The measure that addresses this directly is to fund rural services on a different basis: by distance to the nearest alternative rather than by headcount. A village school of forty pupils is not inefficient if the next school is fifty kilometres away. This would not repopulate anywhere by itself, but it removes the mechanism that turns a small decline into an irreversible one. The second problem is economic. Rural areas are left with an ageing population and a narrow employment base, usually agriculture, which cannot absorb graduates. Young people do not leave because they dislike the countryside; they leave because there is no job there matching what they trained for. Here the useful response is infrastructure rather than persuasion. Reliable high-speed internet makes remote professional work possible from a village, and where that has been provided, some return migration has followed. It is a partial remedy — it does nothing for work that must be done in person — but it addresses the actual cause. Both measures share a logic: rather than asking young people to stay, they remove the reasons for leaving.

Why this answer scores well

The pairing is exact, which is the whole test of this question type. Problem one is service collapse; solution one is a funding rule that stops the feedback loop. Problem two is the employment base; solution two is connectivity. Neither solution floats free of a stated problem, and neither problem is left unanswered. Task Response: both halves of the question are covered at equal depth. Each solution also concedes a limit — "would not repopulate anywhere by itself", "does nothing for work that must be done in person". Acknowledging that a remedy is partial is a Band 7-plus move, because real remedies are partial, and it reads as judgement rather than hedging. Specificity: "fund rural services by distance to the nearest alternative rather than by headcount" is a genuine proposal. Compare it with "the government should support rural areas", which is a placeholder. Specificity is what Task Response rewards here and it is also what gives you something to develop. Coherence and Cohesion: the final sentence identifies what the two measures have in common, which closes the essay on an idea rather than a summary. Lexical Resource: "drift", "headcount", "absorb graduates", "return migration", "feeds itself". The causal chain in paragraph two — services close, which gives families a reason to leave — is expressed compactly and precisely.

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