Writing Task 2Advantages and disadvantagesTarget band 7Technology

Task

An increasing number of people now work from home rather than travelling to an office. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Task

Note the word "outweigh". This is a judgement, not a list — you must reach a verdict on which side wins and defend it.

Model answer(258 words)

Home working has moved in a few years from an unusual arrangement to an ordinary one. In my view its advantages do outweigh its drawbacks, though the balance is narrower than its enthusiasts usually admit. The clearest gain is time. A commute of an hour each way consumes roughly ten hours a week, and when that time is returned people overwhelmingly spend it on sleep, exercise and family rather than on more work. The second gain is geographic: an employer no longer restricted to one city can hire the best candidate rather than the nearest one, and a worker is no longer forced to move to an expensive capital to have a career at all. The disadvantages are real and are mostly social rather than practical. Junior staff learn their job largely by overhearing it, and that transmission does not survive a video call, so the people who lose most are the ones with least experience. Isolation is a genuine cost too, particularly for anyone living alone, and the boundary between work and home erodes when both occupy the same room. Weighing these, I still come down on the side of the advantages, but conditionally. The time and geography gains accrue automatically; the losses are largely fixable through deliberate effort — scheduled office days, formal mentoring, a clear finishing time. A benefit you get for free is worth more than a cost you can design out. The advantages therefore outweigh the disadvantages, provided employers treat the drawbacks as problems to be managed rather than as an acceptable price.

Why this answer scores well

Task Response: the prompt says "outweigh", so it demands a verdict, and the verdict appears in the introduction, is revisited in paragraph four and restated in the conclusion. Note it is a *conditional* verdict — "provided employers treat the drawbacks as problems to be managed" — which is more defensible than an unqualified one. The fourth paragraph is what lifts this. It does not add a new advantage; it explains the *reasoning* behind the judgement — automatic gains versus fixable losses. That is the difference between listing and weighing, and it is exactly what this question type asks for. Coherence and Cohesion: paragraph roles are announced early ("The clearest gain is time", "The disadvantages are real and are mostly social"). Cohesion comes from that structure, not from a chain of connectors. Lexical Resource: precise and unshowy — "commute", "accrue", "transmission", "erodes", "boundary". The observation that juniors "learn their job largely by overhearing it" is the kind of concrete phrasing that scores far better than "communication becomes difficult". Grammatical Range: a fronted participle ("Weighing these"), a relative clause carrying real content ("an employer no longer restricted to one city"), and controlled subordination throughout. To reach Band 8: sharpen one example with a figure, and vary the sentence openings a little more.

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