Task
People today often change career several times during their working lives. Why does this happen, and do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
Task
Two questions, both compulsory. The second is an opinion question hiding inside a two-part prompt — take a position rather than describing both possibilities.
Model answer(253 words)
It is now unremarkable for someone to work in three or four unrelated fields across a career. This shift has identifiable causes, and I regard it, on balance, as a positive one.
The main reason is that jobs themselves have become less stable. Whole occupations now appear and disappear within a single working life, so a worker who trained for one of them has no choice but to move when it contracts. Alongside this, the expectation of lifelong employment with one firm has largely gone; when employers no longer offer permanence, employees have little reason to offer loyalty in return. A third factor is simply that working lives are longer, and forty-five years is a long time to spend doing one thing.
As for whether this is desirable, I think the gains outweigh the costs. Someone who has worked in several fields brings transferable judgement that a specialist often lacks, and is far less exposed when one industry declines. There is also a straightforward argument about satisfaction: a person who discovers at thirty that they chose wrong at eighteen is now able to correct that, which earlier generations largely could not.
The obvious cost is insecurity, and it is not trivial. Changing career usually means a period of lower income and retraining that few employers will fund. But this argues for better support during transitions rather than for a return to fixed careers.
So the causes are structural rather than a change in attitude, and the development is on balance a positive one.
Why this answer scores well
Both questions are answered, in their own paragraphs, and signposted. "As for whether this is desirable" is doing real work — it marks the switch from the first question to the second so the examiner cannot miss that both were addressed. The commonest failure in this type is answering only the first question, and the structure here makes that impossible.
Task Response: the second question is an opinion question, and it is treated as one. The position is stated ("I regard it, on balance, as a positive one"), defended, and restated. A neutral description of both possibilities would have scored lower.
Note how the counter-argument is handled: insecurity is conceded as real and non-trivial, then answered — "this argues for better support during transitions rather than for a return to fixed careers". Conceding then turning is stronger than not conceding at all.
Coherence and Cohesion: the first body paragraph gives three causes in a clear sequence ("The main reason", "Alongside this", "A third factor"), which is enumeration used properly rather than connector-stuffing.
Lexical Resource: "unremarkable", "contracts", "permanence", "transferable judgement", "exposed". "Exposed" used in the sense of vulnerable to risk is precise and idiomatic.
Grammatical Range: a relative clause with real content ("a person who discovers at thirty that they chose wrong at eighteen"), concessive structures, and deliberate variation in sentence length.
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