Writing Task 2Мнение (согласие или несогласие)Целевой балл 7Education

Задание

Some people think university education should be free for all students, regardless of their family income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Задание

Эссе типа «согласны или нет». Частичная позиция вполне допустима и часто её проще обосновать, но заявить её нужно чётко: «частично согласен» без пояснения, с какой именно частью, — самая частая причина потери баллов за Task Response.

Образец ответа(277 слов)

Whether higher education should be funded entirely by the state is a question that divides opinion sharply. I agree that cost should never decide who studies, but I do not accept that free tuition for everyone is the best way to achieve that. The strongest argument for abolishing fees is fairness. Talented students from low-income families often rule out university before they even apply, not because they cannot cope with the work but because they cannot face the debt. A country that loses those students loses doctors and engineers it has already paid to educate through school. There is also a practical benefit: graduates tend to earn more and therefore return the investment through higher tax contributions over a working lifetime. However, universal free tuition has an awkward consequence. Because wealthier families are already far more likely to send their children to university, a blanket subsidy hands the largest benefit to those who need it least, while being funded by taxpayers who never attended. Public money is finite, and every pound spent covering the fees of a student whose parents could comfortably pay is a pound unavailable for grants, housing support, or improving weaker schools. A more effective approach would therefore be targeted rather than universal. Free tuition combined with living grants for students below a defined income threshold removes the barrier where it actually exists, while those who can contribute continue to do so. In conclusion, I agree entirely with the principle behind this proposal but not with the mechanism. The aim should be to guarantee that no capable student is priced out, and targeted funding achieves that more efficiently than making university free for everybody.

Почему этот ответ оценён высоко

Task Response: позиция частичная, но однозначная — согласие с принципом, несогласие с механизмом — и заявлена уже во втором предложении, а не отложена до заключения. Это самый надёжный способ работать с заданиями «to what extent». Coherence and Cohesion: чёткая структура из четырёх шагов (аргумент за, проблема, лучшая альтернатива, вывод). Переход "However, universal free tuition has an awkward consequence" продвигает аргумент, а не просто обозначает контраст. Lexical Resource: сильные тематические сочетания — "blanket subsidy", "income threshold", "living grants", "priced out", "tax contributions". Обратите внимание на "priced out" в заключении: идиома, употреблённая точно, — именно этого требует Band 7. Grammatical Range: сложные конструкции возникают естественно: придаточное причины ("not because they cannot cope... but because they cannot face"), определительное придаточное ("taxpayers who never attended") и сравнительная конструкция в рекомендации. Контроль хороший, есть лишь небольшое повторение начал предложений. Чтобы выйти на Band 8: больше варьировать начала предложений и сделать пример в третьем абзаце конкретным, а не общим.

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