Answer — Exercise 7
7.1 - Happy ending?·Speakout Advanced Plus - Students' Book
Pytanie
Listen to an editor giving the writer feedback on the review. Make notes on a) the strengths b) the weaknesses c) what to change.
Odpowiedź
the strengths
- clear sense of film
- recommendation
- background information
- rich language
the weaknesses
- too long
- too much info / detail in each paragraph
what to change
- cut whole sentences
- e.g. first long sentence
- cut 'meanwhile' start 'relatively few'