Task
Some people believe that reducing plastic waste is the responsibility of governments, while others argue that it is individual consumers who must change their behaviour. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Task
A discuss-both-views-and-give-your-opinion essay. You must cover both sides properly and state a clear position — answering only one side caps Task Response at Band 5.
Model answer(285 words)
Plastic pollution is now visible from riverbanks to ocean trenches, and there is little agreement about who should be held accountable for it. While individual choices clearly matter, I would argue that governments carry the greater share of the responsibility, because only they can change the conditions under which those choices are made.
The case for individual responsibility is straightforward. Consumers decide what to buy, and demand for heavily packaged goods is what makes producing them profitable in the first place. If shoppers consistently refused single-use bottles and bags, manufacturers would have a commercial reason to abandon them. Small habits, repeated across millions of households, also add up: refusing a plastic straw is trivial in isolation but significant at national scale.
Nevertheless, this argument overstates how free those decisions really are. A shopper cannot buy unpackaged rice if no shop stocks it, and recycling carefully achieves very little if the local authority sends every bin to the same landfill. Individuals are choosing from a menu that somebody else has written. Governments, by contrast, write that menu: they can tax virgin plastic, mandate refill schemes, and require packaging to be genuinely recyclable. When Ireland introduced a levy on plastic bags, usage fell dramatically within months — a shift that decades of public appeals had failed to produce.
In my view, the two are not really in competition, but they are not equal either. Consumer pressure signals what is acceptable; regulation determines what is available. Since the second constrains the first, the state must act before individual willingness can translate into measurable change.
Ultimately, asking citizens to solve plastic pollution through shopping habits alone places the burden on those with the least power to shift the system.
Why this answer scores well
Task Response: both views are given a full body paragraph, and the writer's position is stated in the introduction, developed in paragraph four, and restated in the conclusion. Crucially, the position is a qualified one — "not really in competition, but not equal either" — rather than a flat assertion, which reads as a more mature answer.
Coherence and Cohesion: each paragraph opens with a sentence that announces its job ("The case for individual responsibility is straightforward", "Nevertheless, this argument overstates..."). Cohesion comes from this structure rather than from a shopping list of linkers, which is what distinguishes Band 8 from Band 6 here.
Lexical Resource: precise, topic-specific collocations — "single-use", "virgin plastic", "refill schemes", "levy", "landfill" — are used naturally rather than inserted for display. The phrase "choosing from a menu that somebody else has written" is a controlled metaphor, exactly the kind of flexible usage the Band 8 descriptor asks for.
Grammatical Range: there is a genuine mix of conditional ("If shoppers consistently refused... manufacturers would have"), concessive subordination ("While individual choices clearly matter"), and a relative clause carrying real content. Sentence length varies deliberately, and the short final sentence lands the argument.
What stops it being a Band 9: the Ireland example would be stronger with an approximate figure, and one or two sentences could be tightened without loss.
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