Writing Task 2Problème et solutionBand visé 7Education

Tâche

In many countries, young people are leaving rural areas to live in cities. What problems does this cause, and what measures could be taken to address them?

Réponse modèle(270 mots)

The drift of young people from the countryside to cities is reshaping rural life in much of the world. It creates two serious problems in particular, and each has a response that is realistic rather than merely well-intentioned. The first problem is the collapse of local services. Schools, clinics and bus routes are funded and justified by the number of people using them, so when the working-age population leaves, these close — which then gives the remaining families a further reason to go. The decline feeds itself. The measure that addresses this directly is to fund rural services on a different basis: by distance to the nearest alternative rather than by headcount. A village school of forty pupils is not inefficient if the next school is fifty kilometres away. This would not repopulate anywhere by itself, but it removes the mechanism that turns a small decline into an irreversible one. The second problem is economic. Rural areas are left with an ageing population and a narrow employment base, usually agriculture, which cannot absorb graduates. Young people do not leave because they dislike the countryside; they leave because there is no job there matching what they trained for. Here the useful response is infrastructure rather than persuasion. Reliable high-speed internet makes remote professional work possible from a village, and where that has been provided, some return migration has followed. It is a partial remedy — it does nothing for work that must be done in person — but it addresses the actual cause. Both measures share a logic: rather than asking young people to stay, they remove the reasons for leaving.

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