Answer for exercise 7
The solution for exercise 7 in chapter 7.1 - Happy ending? of Speakout Advanced Plus - Students' Book by Frances Eales and Steve Oakes
Question
Listen to an editor giving the writer feedback on the review. Make notes on a) the strengths b) the weaknesses c) what to change.
Answer
the strengths
- clear sense of film
- recommendation
- background information
- rich language
the weaknesses
- too long
- too much info / detail in each paragraph
what to change
- cut whole sentences
- e.g. first long sentence
- cut 'meanwhile' start 'relatively few'