The key to exercise solutions in chapter 3g - Writing for the textbook Spark 4 - Student's Book with authors Virginia Evans, Jenny Dooley from Express Publishing
Question
Read the model and list the viewpoints the writer gives to support their opinions. What reasons/examples do they use? What is the opposing viewpoint? Find examples of formal style.
Replace the topic sentences in the main body paragraphs with other appropriate ones.
Answer
1) Mobile phones are important in emergenices, e.g students can use mobile phones to call for help if they are walking to or from school and feel they are in danger. ; 2) Mobile phones are convenient, e.g students can use their phones to let their parents know where they are or call for a ride after school activities. ; 3) The opposing viewpoint is that mobile phones distract students during school, e.g teachers say students spend time texting instead of paying attention in class and ringtones often interrupt situations. ; 4) Examples of formal style: "In the first place, mobile phones are very important in emergency situations." ; "In conclusion, even though mobile phones can cause problems in the classroom, I feel students should have them for reasons of safety and convenience".
Firstly, mobile phones play a crucial role in ensuring student safety. ; Moreover, mobile phones offer practical benefits for students. ; To sum up, students should be allowed to carry phones in school, provided clear rules are set to avoid distractions.