Answer — Exercise 3
1f - Writing·On Screen B1+ - Student's Book
Question
- Find the topic sentences in the main body paragraphs. Does each introduce a new topic? Which sentences support the topic sentences by giving examples, results, reasons? Which linking words influence the supporting sentences?
- Replace the topic sentences with other appropriate ones.
- Find examples of formal language.
Answer
- Para B: To begin with, going to work means that mothers can provide more income for the family. - Yes - example - For example, they can buy better food and clothing for their children. (For example); Para C: Secondly, working mothers are excellent role models for children. Yes - example - For instance, they demonstrate how to take care of children, the house and pursue a career. (For instance); Para D: On the other hand, working long hours means that mothers spend a lot of time away from home. - Yes - results - Therefore, they may miss out on quality time with their children. (Therefore)
- Para B: In the first place, working mothers are better able to provide for their family.; Para C: Furthermore, they set a good example for their children.; Para D: However, working mothers may be away from home a lot.
- full verb forms: e.g. they can buy, means, may miss out on; formal linkers: As a result, To begin with, On the other hand etc.; longer, more complex sentences: e.g. Secondly, working mother ... pursue career.; more advanced vocabulary: e.g. pursue a career, beneficial etc.; no imperatives